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I walk past you every day
I stare at you every time
I think of you every minute
But when I go up to you I got nothing to say

When you come around I become invisible
When you are with your friends you ignore me
When we finally get some time alone you don't say much
But you always give me that lovely touch.

It can't be you say
We are too different for each other
You got another one you whisper with your lovely voice
And that's when I turn around and think for myself:
That's when I pick up my bleeding heart from the cold ground
and squeeze it back to where it belongs, in my empty crying soul

That's when I see your soul trying to escape
Knowing that the right cannot wait
Knowing that it can be
Knowing that you and me forever will be

Still in our blinded minds we cannot see
That we belong to eachother we really do
But the love can be a lie
And I tell myself once, why?
:iconexctonic:
Love can be a lie
Another poem as I promised! ;)
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:icondog9813:
~dog9813 Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is a nice poem
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~ExctonIc Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconmello-shaii:
Aww.. it's sad, but it's also well-written! : )
Great work! :aww:
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~ExctonIc Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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~IBlodyXI Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In my case it can also be a pain in the ass D:
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~ExctonIc Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe... for some it might be... ;)
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~crescentnocturn Jan 10, 2012  Student General Artist
aaawwwwww
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~ExctonIc Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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~crescentnocturn Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
;P
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*nanonear Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's beautiful. :)
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