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Red rose of beauty
With thorns so sharp and yet leaves so fragile
Red like the purest blood.
So harmless, yet so harmful.
Red rose of beauty let me pick you with fragility, take care of you
with love and forever watch your leaves grow.
Red rose of beauty I will take care of you untill you wither.
Red Rose of Beauty

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Wooow!
Unbelievable that so many
have faved this poem and commented, thank you every single one for the fav and the lovely comment. I am forever grateful :)
Thank you, thank you, thank you <3
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Onizukaman Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Roses are probably my favorite flowers, and to read this.. this is truly beautiful
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ExctonIc Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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StreetAngel13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
i love this on e:love:
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Rinoa-Akime Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student Writer
Awe it's a beautiful poem =P
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dog9813 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful poem
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butyokkapitany Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
Aww... This is very beautiful!!! I love it!!! :D :D
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EspioArtwork31 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
No Time for Roses
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Chipmunkgal101 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow this is beautiful roses are my favorite.
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Ragnilove Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
me encantan las rosas y estas se ven muy hermosas
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ryuzakiro Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student General Artist
woow
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LusoNisshoku Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful ♥
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Aurantiaca-Caelum Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Heheh awww sooo sweet :D
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Martylon Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really pretty little poem. Well written. :aww:
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Eirik2103 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Naaw.. Beautiful poem ^^
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ahdolah Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
I hope you like this...Happy Valentine's Day !!
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Pretty poem. :)
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AveNDarknesS Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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Dragon-Clawshade Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Lovely picture and poem, I like the concept the writing portrays. :D

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Love Is Love
♂ + ♂ = ♥
♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
Put this on your signature if you agree!
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Sparklycupcake23 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Artist
so ...so so beautiful! I' doing a poem of roses and love too! I HAVE TO PRESENT TOMOROW T_T heres mine..wat do u think?
btw my teacher thinks I'm forcing it to rhyme how emberassing TPT
Yearning for that connection
that the rose brought
he sees love in the reflection
no thorn he fought
pedals swaying in the wind
bring fragrences of strength
never to be dim
love endures a great length
waiting for that day to connect once more
let the passion lead the way
draw me roses of galore
so if love is ever in theft
you'll know your memories have never left
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ExctonIc Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's very beautiful, well written! :)
You should go for it, I bet the class will like it! ^^
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Sparklycupcake23 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Artist
they did like it!!! <3 I'm happy ahahah
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ExctonIc Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good! :D
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Sparklycupcake23 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Artist
I hate mushyness n stuff but aahahahah watever
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AkiUrameshi Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
That is such a pretty poem.
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roxazza Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it looks so cool
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Penfan Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Lovely poem, beautiful roses.
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nanonear Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done! It's beautiful. :)
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mello-shaii Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Aww, it's such a lovely poem!! : )
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ts-squid Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very prettily written, good work!
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